Black Night Werecat

I absolutely love this! Really, the only thing I can find to critique is the last line for the last two stanzas - "Only bring more pain" and "The Voice, ...

A little cryptic, but it sounds as though this is a poem about a drunk driver who is utterly debauched and died after driving into a lake or some such ...

This is good, though it has a couple of problems. You have a couple problems with spelling and homophones - "despare" is spelled "despair", and the line "You see straight ...

Hey, Vandria (cool name, by the way =3) Ok, I'm going to write two reviews for this (one for each poem) just so that you don't have to read one ...

This is good! =3 One of the problems I had with it is the format - normally people write poems and songs like this: i should tell u about everything ...

This was good - no, great! I love the concept of it, and how funny it was. XD The beat for me was practically non-existent, but that didn't stop me ...

This is good! I had a problem with finding the rhythm, or beat, to it. It just wasn't a very clear one. However, some of the rhyming was great! Whereas ...

Black Night Werecat, to get the a with the umlaut above it (ä), hold down the ALT button on your keyboard, and press 0228 on the number pad. If you're ...

First of all, before I continue with this review, I'd like to mention the 2:1 ratio rule - in order to post a story or poem of your own, you ...

Snoink is right - you should try to add a little more power to you poem. It's a really great poem, the concept is awesome, however, you really shouldn't be ...

Omg, I totally agree with this poem! I feel like this all the time! Just one question though: I'm not sure if I understood this poem correctly, because in the ...

Geez, June, leave a little reviewing for the rest of us! :D Just kidding! Anyway, ignore the fact that Juniper has given you a review for the time being. I'm ...

I loved this poem! Unfortunately, I couldn't find anything wrong with it other than the things that June pointed out. Well, actually, I did think that the flow of the ...

I love your poem. Here are some of the mistakes: from when I rise [s]to[/s] 'till the dawn birds fall drowsy, shouldn't it be 'till, and not to? Here: Not ...

I love the concept of the poem, but the way you word it is kind of... well, to be quite frank, it sucks. I'm sorry if that's harsh, but the ...